The woman at the car rental had a sinus condition with a permanent sound. She was very small in her high-backed leather chair; she seemed to grow into it, slowly, like a sea sponge into its coral cave. Her office was cluttered in a way that felt staged: an out-of-body affectation, a ruse for the plebs.<\/p>\n
She said to me, \u201cYou don\u2019t want roadside assistance, illness, personal liability, nothing. You\u2019re sure about that? You know about the keyless ignition; you know how it works?\u201d<\/p>\n
\u201cI don\u2019t know, Verlean,\u201d I said, trying to pronounce the name on her desk. \u201cBut I\u2019m sure I can figure it out.\u201d<\/p>\n
Her phone rang, and she answered it. \u201cYeah, it\u2019s V. Uh-huh. I don\u2019t care about that. No \u2026 I just need it clean and by four like every day; don\u2019t bother me. Goodbye.\u201d<\/p>\n
I indicated a plaque on the wall. \u201cYou\u2019re employee of the month.\u201d<\/p>\n
\u201cWhat? Oh, that thing\u2019s twenty years old. Ain\u2019t I young and good-lookin\u2019? Thanks for noticing. The award\u2019s from when I was nice.\u201d<\/p>\n
The phone rang again, and she ignored it. \u201cYou need to push down the brake or the car won\u2019t start. Push it down. You got me?\u201d<\/p>\n
I had rented the car in Ann Arbor because my older brother lived there. If anything went sideways, I could make a nuisance of myself at his home. Driving through town, you see what a thriving and diverse place AA is, full of pleasures and the promise of higher education. When I was a kid, going to U of M meant a solid future. Wolverines weren\u2019t guaranteed the world, but they had done well enough to earn your respect; to have a house, car, and mortgage; to expect avocado in two meals out of ten.<\/p>\n
I was driving up I-75 toward Flint. My idea was that I would go to my old neighborhood and see the house I had grown up in, see it as it is now, as a pile of wooden bones. This sight was to imbue me with the creative power to write well. I needed to see my father\u2019s house as an empty abandoned husk. That was the plan.<\/p>\n
You get off I-75 at exit 117, turn onto South Ballenger, and you drive toward the Civic Park neighborhood. As you head into town, you start to see signs of bizarre and elaborate devastation, blocks on blocks of rubble. There are people outside, some, but few children. No one seems to move with purpose. An air of resignation swirls around everything you see.<\/p>\n
My rental car was a brand-new Toyota four-door with almost no go and a boomy stereo system. I couldn\u2019t fathom for whom it might be designed. But the thing was silver and new, and it positively gleamed its newness as it rolled in the September sun. When I stopped down the street from Civic Park School and looked out at my old neighborhood, I thought about the insurance I told Verlean I didn\u2019t need.<\/p>\n
I was too far from the rigors of my childhood to feel the shame of it, just then.<\/p>\n
The street was mostly deserted. I could see the house in the distance, but even from a distance, I knew it was little more than a shell. I got out of the car and stretched my legs. I tend to travel with snacks; Pringle crumbs fell from my trousers. I pressed the button on the key fob, which is supposed to lock the car, three times in succession. Behind me, Civic Park School loomed; big boards, whole makeshift planes of wood, covered what once were windows. A fence I used to climb for fun was stripped to a few forlorn poles.<\/p>\n
I thought for a moment about the possibility that pressing the lock button three times resulted in an unlocked <\/em>door. Was that possible? Once locked the door, twice gave a confirmatory honk, thrice unlocked the door in case you were panicking. Could it be like that?<\/p>\n But it made no sense at all. If one imagined the button worked through a cycle in three positions (lock, honk, unlock, repeat) there was the ever-present danger that pressing down the lock button an irregular, or unknown, number of times would result in one being \u201clost\u201d in the cycle. To be more precise: If there are three such positions, positions one and three\u2014lock and unlock\u2014are indistinguishable from the fob-holder\u2019s perspective. That is to say, from my point of view, an unlock and a lock would look and sound the same. Position two, the honking horn, is well distinguished from the other two; its very nature is one of separation and recognition. So, the question, again, that I was mulling furiously over in my head, as I looked upon the utter desolation my childhood street had become, was something like the following.<\/p>\n Is a proper formalization of the keyless door lock on my Toyota compact rental something like this:<\/p>\n C1 [P1(L), P2(H), P3(UL)]<\/p>\n C2 [P4(L), P5(H), P6(UL)]<\/p>\n Etc.<\/p>\n Where:<\/p>\n C is for cycle, P is for one press of the \u201clock\u201d button on the key fob, L is for lock, H is for honk, and UL is for unlock?<\/p>\n Thinking of these and other matters distracted me from the fact that I was walking away<\/em> from my father\u2019s house, toward one of the only occupied homes on the block. A young man was standing on the porch in a white jersey. He was looking out over the street, but it wasn\u2019t clear to me what had caught his attention.<\/p>\n I thought I would pop up his front walk and make his acquaintance.<\/p>\n As I came up the cracked concrete walkway, I noticed there was something strange about him. He was big: maybe 6\u20192\u201d and two-hundred and thirty or so pounds. His hair was done in cornrows, and he had a formation of small dark moles on his left cheek. His right eye had suffered a devastating wound. The organ was white, almost totally without iris or pupil, and angry lines of blood snaked across its surface. It looked as if someone had tried to remove it and failed.<\/p>\n He asked me what I wanted in a slow and nonconfrontational way.<\/p>\n \u201cI\u2019m from this neighborhood,\u201d I said. \u201cI grew up here.\u201d<\/p>\n \u201cOkay. Really?\u201d<\/p>\n \u201cYeah.\u201d<\/p>\n \u201cYour car down there?\u201d<\/p>\n I looked up the street at the Toyota. \u201cYeah.\u201d<\/p>\n \u201cYou should, um, you better watch that car.\u201d<\/p>\n \u201cI will.\u201d<\/p>\n \u201cN—– is crazy out here.\u201d<\/p>\n \u201cI know. I will watch out.\u201d<\/p>\n \u201cWhat you want?\u201d<\/p>\n I told him I was writing a piece about the neighborhood. I wanted to get a sense of what had happened to it since my family had moved out. He didn\u2019t seem eager to talk, but he wasn\u2019t dismissive either. He looked through me as he spoke, as if I were an aberration\u2014psychic, social, or otherwise\u2014that should soon dissipate. I asked him when Civic Park School shut down.<\/p>\n \u201cI don\u2019t know, not exactly. Could be the year Obama\u2014the same time they made him President.\u201d<\/p>\n \u201cSo, in \u201909. It\u2019s been shut down ten years?\u201d<\/p>\n \u201cCould be right.\u201d<\/p>\n I had brought an audio recorder with me but forgot to turn it on. Would he be offended if I did? Should I ask? I looked back at the Toyota. It glimmered unmolested. I estimated the amount of time it would take me to reach the car running at full speed. Perhaps forty seconds.<\/p>\n \u201cThe media talks a lot about violence here,\u201d I said, \u201cviolence and the water crisis. Is that all<\/em> that\u2019s going on?\u201d<\/p>\n To my left, the sound of a screen door opening. He slowly looked toward the sound and spoke without looking at me.<\/p>\n \u201cThat\u2019s what it is. You have to watch a lot.\u201d<\/p>\n \u201cWatch?\u201d<\/p>\n \u201cWatch everything.\u201d<\/p>\n Next door, an old woman came out of her house, holding a black dog by its leash. She wore big black sunglasses and very beige clothes. I wasn\u2019t sure, by her appearance and manner, if she was blind.<\/p>\n \u201cWhen did the neighborhood start going down?\u201d I asked.<\/p>\n \u201cProbably the same time like the school. Could be. You should talk to Theresa.\u201d<\/p>\n \u201cThat\u2019s Theresa?\u201d I asked, pointing to the (possibly) blind woman.<\/p>\n \u201cNo, that\u2019s her sister,\u201d he said and then pointed, \u201cResa! Man here wants to talk to you. Says he\u2019s a writer.\u201d<\/p>\n A second woman came out onto the porch next door. Her hair was wrapped in a blue and purple scarf; she wore white Nikes. As she descended the porch steps, whispering something to her (probably) blind sister as she did so, she looked at me with almost parodic intensity.<\/p>\n \u201cYou can see does she want to talk to you,\u201d the young man said.<\/p>\n \u201cThanks. What\u2019s your name?\u201d I asked before turning to Theresa.<\/p>\n \u201cShe might want to talk to you.\u201d<\/p>\n I walked over to Theresa\u2019s yard, and she told me to stop. Behind me, the young man went back into the house. He moved with slow steps that creaked across the porch.<\/p>\n \u201cWho are you?\u201d Theresa asked.<\/p>\n She looked about forty-five years old. There was a deep furrow running vertically between her eyes. Her voice was deep, but it had a crumbling quality, like the voices of some smokers who yet have strong lungs.<\/p>\n I told her I was writing about the neighborhood. I smiled to the gums and glued my elbows to my ribcage.<\/p>\n \u201cYou grew up on this block? I don\u2019t know you.\u201d<\/p>\n \u201cI lived here about twenty-five years ago.\u201d<\/p>\n \u201cWhat you want to know? You should leave. You don\u2019t belong here. You should get somewhere before it comes dark. N—– is crazy out here.\u201d<\/p>\n \u201cI just wanted to ask about your experience since the water crisis and all.\u201d<\/p>\n \u201cWe had a triple homicide last night!\u201d<\/p>\n The blind woman was being picked up by a large black SUV. A man in a brown fedora got out and helped both dog and woman into the vehicle. He smiled the whole time and spoke incessantly. Theresa watched the pickup through to completion. Finally, she said, absently, \u201cShe going to church.\u201d<\/p>\n \u201cIt\u2019s Tuesday.\u201d<\/p>\n \u201cShe go every day.\u201d<\/p>\n I pressed on: \u201cWhy do you think the neighborhood is in this condition? What happened?\u201d<\/p>\n \u201cYou show me which house you grew up in. Point to it.\u201d<\/p>\n \u201cIt\u2019s down the block.\u201d<\/p>\n \u201cThis place, you want to know about it? It\u2019s a hateful place. I would leave tomorrow if I could. Only one other house on this block got somebody in it. Miss Gladys house up by your car. She call us mean<\/em> people. We\u2019re not mean, we\u2019re tired. I\u2019m tired of this every day, when everything is that same slow sickness.\u201d<\/p>\n I asked why she didn\u2019t leave, and her eyes became large.<\/p>\n \u201cYou need to leave! You need to go where you belong. Ain\u2019t nothing to learn. And you need to show me which house was yours. Point to it when you get down there.\u201d<\/p>\n I turned and walked toward my father\u2019s house. As I passed, the young man with the ruined eye came out onto the porch to stare at me. He held a bowl of cereal and milk that he took a bite of with a big metal spoon. I waived at him, but he didn\u2019t respond.<\/p>\n When I was in front of the house, I stopped and looked at it. I recognized the address number and nothing else. All of the colors seemed wrong; the structure looked too dangerous to enter. The fa\u00e7ade and roof were full of strange holes, holes without a clear history. 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