{"id":11679,"date":"2014-04-30T05:00:44","date_gmt":"2014-04-30T12:00:44","guid":{"rendered":"http:\/\/bullmensfiction.com?p=11679&#038;preview_id=11679"},"modified":"2022-08-03T13:15:26","modified_gmt":"2022-08-03T17:15:26","slug":"bullshot-austin-hayden","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/mrbullbull.com\/newbull\/fiction\/bullshot-austin-hayden\/","title":{"rendered":"BULLshot: Austin Hayden"},"content":{"rendered":"<p><strong>PW<\/strong>: \u201cHunting\u201d begins: \u201cHere\u2019s what I have to say.\u201d I immediately thought: okay, I\u2019m in for a campfire or bar chair type of chat. Was the intent of the first line to suggest that this was the type of storytelling the reader was in for?<\/p>\n<p>&nbsp;<\/p>\n<p><strong>AH<\/strong>: Yeah. The story isn&#8217;t urgent. It&#8217;s pretty passive, really. The &#8220;Here&#8217;s what I have to say:&#8221; stories that exist in my life, with kids like me in bars or around bonfires or whatever, usually aren&#8217;t pressing. Pressing in the same way it is when, say, your dad or girlfriend says, &#8220;Here&#8217;s what I have to say.&#8221;<\/p>\n<p>Reading it, there are several ways to emphasize the phrase. The dude who hasn&#8217;t had a chance to speak: &#8220;Here&#8217;s what\u00a0<i>I\u00a0<\/i>have to say.&#8221; The dude who has something seriously important to say &#8220;Here&#8217;s what I\u00a0<i>have to\u00a0<\/i>say.&#8221; The dude who had a couple too many Ruthless Ryes and lost track of himself for a second: &#8220;<i>Here&#8217;s\u00a0<\/i>what I have to say.&#8221;<\/p>\n<p>All the stories I wrote around this time had an intro like that, &#8220;Here&#8217;s my side of the story:&#8221; or &#8220;This was the same summer as <i>yadda yadda yadda<\/i>:&#8221;\u2013conversational intros, I guess. The same way my friends tell stories on porches. None of my Muncie friends read stories like I do, so it&#8217;s like, yeah, I guess I&#8217;ll aim for them re: language and theme and whatever else. I think the intro seems to build it up, making it personal right away.<\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>The author of &#8220;Hunting&#8221; on the story&#8217;s first line<\/p>\n","protected":false},"author":2,"featured_media":10483,"comment_status":"open","ping_status":"open","sticky":false,"template":"","format":"standard","meta":{"footnotes":""},"categories":[6],"tags":[387,342],"class_list":["post-11679","post","type-post","status-publish","format-standard","has-post-thumbnail","hentry","category-fiction","tag-the-writing-craft","tag-writing","writer-pete-witte"],"_links":{"self":[{"href":"https:\/\/mrbullbull.com\/newbull\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/11679","targetHints":{"allow":["GET"]}}],"collection":[{"href":"https:\/\/mrbullbull.com\/newbull\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts"}],"about":[{"href":"https:\/\/mrbullbull.com\/newbull\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/types\/post"}],"author":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/mrbullbull.com\/newbull\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/users\/2"}],"replies":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/mrbullbull.com\/newbull\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/comments?post=11679"}],"version-history":[{"count":3,"href":"https:\/\/mrbullbull.com\/newbull\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/11679\/revisions"}],"predecessor-version":[{"id":11944,"href":"https:\/\/mrbullbull.com\/newbull\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/11679\/revisions\/11944"}],"wp:featuredmedia":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/mrbullbull.com\/newbull\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/media\/10483"}],"wp:attachment":[{"href":"https:\/\/mrbullbull.com\/newbull\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/media?parent=11679"}],"wp:term":[{"taxonomy":"category","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/mrbullbull.com\/newbull\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/categories?post=11679"},{"taxonomy":"post_tag","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/mrbullbull.com\/newbull\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/tags?post=11679"}],"curies":[{"name":"wp","href":"https:\/\/api.w.org\/{rel}","templated":true}]}}